小弟用俺破破的英文幫你一下

Sorry to bother you.
My order number is "你的訂單號碼".
I placed my order on "幾月幾日".
BUt my ordered items are not shipped till now.
Please expedite my order,thank you!

如文法有錯還請糾正...
好久沒複習英文了說...@_@