你的發音不錯
給你意見
1.把句子分段(依語意組),語意組結束才能停一下下
2.語意組的重音要重讀,其餘輕讀(當然整句有最重音),輕讀的地方就要連音消音變音
例如:
Once upon a time,/ the storybooks say,/ the turtle had a voice/ as dogs and cows/ and ducks and lions/ and other animals have.